NimbusTheGeneral's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Take on me rap (Working T]

This is actually really good

Well...the lyrics are lol. To be honest you basically have to "feel" what you're spittin'. If it's regret/sorrow/etc., let it be felt with your voice. If it's anger/angst/rage/etc. let it come out. You can't sound angry if you're talking in your normal voice. Same thing with this, you can't project the emotions of confusion and bitterness (sorrow, regret) if you're speaking in your regular voice.

I'd say practice it out loud with different sounding voices, see what sounds right to you. Listen to some tracks that have a similar theme to see how their voice sounds and try to emulate it. I started out the same way with my voice, but found what people were talking about when they said "The listener can't FEEL what you're saying, can't picture walking in your shoes, if you're speaking normally. Put some EMOTION behind it."

The lyrics are on point, so just work on the vocals fam.

Nimbus

[im so hood remix]

Creative

Not original with the synth, and especially an industry beat, but the lyrics were on point. Emulation is a difficult thing to do, especially if it's not normally your style of music, so kudos on that. Definitely a good track, one that deserves a spot on a mixtape.

Good job on this one.

mseemercury responds:

thx brotha

[Lejin - BOSS]

Well...I just want to say

I'll give you at least a one. But only because you pretend to be such a boss. The track was okay, nothing special, and your lyrics could've been better had you switched topics for once in your life.

Oh yeah...talk about being exposed? Lejin Almighty Records new artist Jerkins (as if that was an actual label) rippin' Spawn? Yo, you're the biggest liar on this website (bigger than what's his face sellin' his beats for 5Gs). That track wasn't even about Spawn, it was Jerkins vs. Mastermind. And he's not a part of your imaginary record label. Don't worry though, if this comment gets deleted I'll just keep a copy of it and post it on my page where everyone can see it.

Keep being fake. You talk about all the fake ones, but your'e the biggest one of all man. ELL OH ELL. You retards make me laugh.

Lejin responds:

Hey arent that washed up over aged rapper wannabe with the boring raps who flopped hard at the youtube rap contest? I heard you got so discouraged and admitted wanting to quit rap.

Good choice cause you suck and your never gonna get signed at this rate. Your too old you missed your boat already you old stressbag. good luck on that dick ride campaign MC NumbBUTT, but remember:

We getting money ova here you gettin mad ova there, git maaaaaaaaad you pathethic washed up no name rapper wannabe broke ass cracker.

WE RuN THiS SHiiiiiiiT!!!! BOOOOOM!!! im a BOSS go fake laugh on ventrillo you panicing old flopping no name piece of shit hahaha youll never in your life be worth hip hop NG's #1 artist's attention.

This is REAL ova FAKE. Get on your job n hate it. Cause we love it. =D

That truth hurts!
Go pop a pain pill and vote zero =D Feel better in the morning...

unless that heart attack kicks in during those Big Bad Lejin Nightmares you keep suffering from getting no sleep trying to weezle your way into get noticed by having hip hop NG's #1 artist's name in your mouth.

<<BANG>>KO!!!
Hug the floor rock bottom.

[[718] Truth Hurts RMX]

LOL

Funny how this is Lejin vs. Warspawn, but everything you played of Spawn (which was grossly uneven with what you played for Lejin...nut hugger) was against that Jerkins guy. So how is this Lejin vs. Spawn? What a DJ lol. You just as fake as Lejin, Rav, and the rest of 'em lmfao!!! I'll be up on Harlem next month, tell Lejin come battle me face to face if he ain't scared.

Nimbus

BxRed responds:

O WOW!!! No WaY!! sO Diz is the Wrong Guy??? DAM>> I didnt no that !! lOLZ.. O MAN.. come on Nimbus I no the trackz and of course i no who the two tracks were for.. Dam u dont no whatz being a DJ!! so dont say am fake cuz u shouldnt even be talkin... U startin with me.. then u dealin with Bx and thatz it.. If u got a problem with me and what i do then Let me noe.. what ever u wrote now it dont phaze me... so Hop off and stay with ur Shyt.. if u even rap still...

But listen i dont really care if u comin to harlem cuz itz aint my ho0d so do what ever u want but just dont tell me to tell lej.. If u typed it to me.. then u can Type it to him ur own Self.. if u hav a problem with Lej then u deal wit it by tellin him!! aiight my nikka.. XD Nice try

ANd O yea Lejin said he COngrats u on humiliating urself on losin the YouTube Rap COntest and ur Floppin talents have no equal... Except for Ses.

>BANG< K.O

Dj 718

TRUTH HURTS!!!!!!!
BX Stand UP!!

[[718] Rumble Battle]

Merc all the way

"Mercury's too big for anyone's plate" that line killed it right there. Rav just needs to learn how to clean up his lyrics and learn to write...and...learn everything about music. But yeah, good mix, but Merc took it hands down.

[war-pawn diss towards warspawn]

Well I'll be damned...

Are you sure that's not the cloned Lejin? HAHAHAHA I can't quit laughing at this, it should've been aimed at more than just Spawn!!! Which, at the end it was, but I mean in general hahahaha!

"Dope" shit here fam.

Nimbus

[Dope - GaeChurchBoi(Dope Ver.)]

Wow...

I give it a 4 because the beat was good. Rav, however, is garbage on a mic. Will someone teach this dude how to rap with a clear voice? Don't y'all know anything about post production?

The boy talks so much about being gay you'd figure he'd know better than anyone (which means I'm accusing him of being gay himself, to know so much about it). Wow...garbage lol. Oh, and before y'all say it (I know it's coming), trust me I won't get mad, I'm actually laughing at this. It's kind of funny in a sad, sad way...

If he'd just learn how to rap that would improve his chances. Back to the drawing board with this one y'all.

Lejin responds:

Hey dont come dragging the rest of us down with all your problems your going through. If your gonna quit rapping because you failed thats your personal problem. We will not be held responsible for any heart attacks you suffer.

[[Diego More] Only Me]

I hear you, I hear you

Current Score
3.76 / 5.00 (+ 0.073)

First verse was fiyah - only thing is the next to last line you tried to fit too much in the line. I wasn't able to understand just those few words.

Merc - your verse was real decent, on some real shit. Let 'em know, they don't know!

[Fight [On]]

I won't lie to you

I had 3 tracks to listen to.

One was great, one was average and repetetive, and this one...well, this one reminds me of a Luda track (I can't remember the name of it right now). It sounds almost exactly like it, except with maybe a variation or two. But you're not bad at all, and I give props for that. I just write and spit lyrics, so doing this is beyond my ability.

Stay up fam

[[718] Battle to the Top RMX]

Wow...

I love how my first verse was compared throughout the whole track to Linez's second verse, and somehow none of my second verse made it in the mix of me flippin' everything he said. I give it a 8 because the mix is decent. If you reppin' Linez sayin' he got the win then I guess the ending is fine (even though he didn't win), but if you're just posting a random ending I'd say change it and make something original. A call sign for Dj 718.

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