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NimbusTheGeneral

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It was aight

You gotta do better than a 10-15 second "freestyle" to make me worry about you man. You didn't do bad though. Decent hype track in my opinion. It could've been longer though.

Stay up,

Nimbus The General

Happy Birthday Fam

I'm absolutely POSITIVE I know why this score is so low LOL. Looks like I'm going to have to show the younguns a thing or two LOL. I mean, seeing as how I'm old as dirt and have no real talent to showcase. Sheesh. But anyway, good luck. Everyone's going to need it lmao.

Stay up,

Nimbus The General

THEICONICICON responds:

lol was that being sarcastic lmao.....but thanks man

Welcome to the comp

Nobody to adhere to! LOL Good luck in the comp fam. I don't want to battle you in the first round. It'll be more fun to get a couple wins under our belts before smashing it out!

Stay up,

Nimbus The General

Blasphem-E responds:

I want to see you in the finals this time around. Good luck to you as well man

Not bad at all

I took off a couple points for a couple reasons.

#1: I would've liked to hear it go longer than 40 seconds. You got a good flow, but it was too short for me to get into.

#2: Scaffolding doesn't build bars, it builds buildings. So technically that metaphore didn't work out as well. But you were fresh the rest of the time.

Seems like we got some good artists this year. Good luck in the comp.

Stay up,

Nimbus The General

Eh, it was alright

I'll be generous and give it one more star than your fake alt account gave Idle Hands lmao.

Enter the competition this year Lejin. I promise when you battle me you'll only get destroyed a little bit. Why you so scared of me? I mean, if you already know I'm better just accept the L. I'm sure you'll have some lame excuse as to why you're not enterting the competition, but yet you still claim to be the #1 artist on NG. Too afraid to get the title taken away from you? Coward much?

Let me guess, too many moves to make, too busy making hit records with fake people you claim to have connections with, taking fake vacations you never go on...truth is, you're just too busy with exams and studying to pass your tests you bum. Quit hiding, join the comp and get wrecked.

Nimbus The General

Lejin responds:

are you describing your fake life story or something here?... does anyone care about your fake stories old man? hahaha your gonna be homeless forever arent u? hahaha im just too big to waste my time obliterating an amatuer like yourself. I need someone who is actually bringing something to the table. All you did last year is lose... and the year before that one too. Needless to mention you lost to one of my henchmen who barely noticed u while i was making big moves and you mad at me and Tom now? Come on crakker not every one has time to stoomp a white cocaroach when theres big money to be made. Im a boss.

- Mr. Big Bad Lejin (Hip Hop NG's#1 Artist)
- A-GANG (Almighty Records)
- Real-Over-Fake -(Approved)

The only negative

I still give this a 10. You still did your thing on here. However, one thing I definitely have to point out being a wordsmith myself..."But it needs to come to a halt like a comma".

Actually, commas don't come to a halt. They come to a pause. Periods come to a halt lol. But that's the only thing I wanted to point out.

Stay up,

Nimbus The General

TFreezyTFZ responds:

OOOOOOOOOO:

I didnt even notice that ;(.
But as I pointed out this was a SUPER quick song. One of the fastest ive recorded and have written. But thanks for the heads up ill be more aware of tiny errors like that in the future lol :).

Thanks for the review!

-T'Freezy

I was surprised.

You got a voice for these kinds of tracks, fam. You definitely did your thing. Seems you know a thing or two about recording yourself and making it sound crisp as well. Good job, keep up the good work. And, yeah, I'd finish this.

Stay up,

Nimbus The General

TFreezyTFZ responds:

WOW, thanks!
Yea ive been working on different ways my voice can sound the best with my mic. Ive had the same one for about a year now and ive come a LONG way. This song was actually just to gain some recording XP. As you can tell i used alot of effects in this one (ad libs, autotune, echo, etc.), im just tryna put out the best content with what I have right now :).

And for sure, ill see how this song goes. Im working on about 3 songs at once right now, and im not so sure this will be on the top of my list to finish. But ill definitely try!

Once again, thanks for the compliments dawg lol.

-T'Freezy

Caaaaaaaanibisssssssss!

The track was ill when Bis ripped it. Very nice touch with it yourself.

Stay up,

Nimbus The General

DJ-Delinquent responds:

i personally think the canibus version is far better then mine

A quick couple of things

You got your timing down on the track, and that's actually something that's real important. You sound as if you're too close to the mic, which makes it difficult to understand your words most of the time. But your flow is nice. Unfortunately, that doesn't make up for the inability to understand what you're saying. With better quality this would sound pro.

I know you said yours wasn't near studio quality, and honestly it's not about the quality on a website like this. But I'm not sure if you have a popper screen for your mic. If you do, move it back about 4-6 inches from the mic. If you don't, hold the mic back about 6-8 inches from your face. I ran into a similar problem when I first started recording, but only because I had a computer, a pre-amp and a concert mic (which is horrible for recording, but can be worked with).

But still, good work fam. Appreciate you coming through the page. It's good to see fans that love real hip-hop. Did you check out the Newgrounds Battle?

Stay up,

Nimbus The General

I suppose

That some people did take this the wrong way. I like the hype track. See you on the battlefield fam.

Nimbus The General

MadFLeX responds:

Haha... I think we're gonna have to grow some thick skin til this thing is over...good luck, we'll do it big.

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