I give it an 8
Two reasons, both having to do with the other:
1. Timing. There are times when your timing is off (too fast, and even your echo is too fast in parts). If your echo is meant to be fast, then that's fine. But your words are too fast in places.
2. Clarity. And this is something I'm going to have to get used to listening to anything by you. Your words get mashed together a little because of the sound of your voice.
Other than that, you get an 8.
Stay up fam,
Nimbus The General
It sounds like
Delinquent was the hip-hop aspect of this track, as well as the sample. Your parts would definitely be the piano, strings, and possibly the xylophone was it? Either way, this is nice. I like when the two of you work together.
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Nimbus The General
Anyone can kill Jay-Z
I'd have to say that the version with Royce Da 5'9" was WAY better than anything Gay-Z could ever do. Did you ever listen to the track I did to mimic Royce? It's called Rip The Game. Check it out.
As for this track, you definitely ripped Gay-Z. What I'd love to see is a mimic of Em on this instrumental. I've been working on it for a couple years now and it's so difficult because he switches up his flow so many times in that track.
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Nimbus The General
Nimbussssssss negro it's been forever son how you been my n***a ....lol
I kno i killed him em changed his flow tooooooooo many times lol but hey it's em lol
Olay!
Or however it's spelled. I was on P's page and saw a beatmaker responded to his blog. So, I decided to check you out. I've listened to everything you've posted so far. I like the vocal sample, although I'm not sure if it needed to be sped up (unless it was done to match the tempo of the music). I'm curious to know what it sounded like as a normal singing voice.
Also, the guitar is good. I like string in my instrumentals (Violin, guitar, cello, etc.). One problem I have with it is something I've noticed with all your submissions so far. It's just simply missing something. It repeats like you basically figured out 8 or even 16 bars and put it on repeat. The drum kicks seem a little low, but not a problem at all because it's easy to find the tempo with the guitar. So, if there was something that could be added (some trumpet blares here and there, a different instrument altogether through the instrumental), this would've been a 10 from me.
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Nimbus The General
Love the intro!
Love how this track flows fam! Y'all did your thing on this one. FYI I put up a news post on my page about my newest project. I'm done with Running Empty (to the Zajed track).
THAT HOOK IS NASTY!
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Nimbus The General
Damn Nimbus, haven't heard from you in a minute. What's good? Thanks a lot for dropping a review man, glad that you enjoyed it. We put emotion into our tracks so this had to be something we had to do. I'll check your page out man, stay up.
Niiiiice
I actually really like this track. Nothing I really say bad about the track, except perhaps the hook shouldn't have been after every verse. Y'all shoulda just flipped verses and had the hook after every 2 verses. But shit is tight. Wait 'till you see what I do with this instrumental LMAO. Called "Running Empty".
Stay up fam,
Nimbus The General
Thanks a lot my n***a for leaving a review, I was wondering if you were even going to review this track considering that this is "right up your alley" like my boy Burly said ;) Either way, about the hook, that does sound like it would have worked better. I didn't even know you were going to use the same instrumental, well good luck man. Stay up.
Oh my damn...
I had to listen to this twice LOL. The flow on this is bananas, love the punches and the personals, the multis, etc. This track was almost flawless, although I can say close to the outtro your vocals faded too much and I couldn't completely hear you.
I won't drop a opinion on the beef LOL, I quit paying attention to the "coalition" after I dropped Rip The Game, but this track is still hott as fuck.
Stay up fam,
Nimbus The General - Imma hit you up when I record my newest 4 songs LOL. You gotta catch up on reviewing my tracks puuuunk lol.
will do my nig
Love this
And absolutely agree with your brother's review on this track. Can I be the angry God on this track? LOL
Besides it only being 42 seconds long, I'm sure I could do some serious damage to a full length track like this.
Stay up, you got great work too
Nimbus The General
If you want to, you sure can try being the angry god! :D
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