You know what fam...
I'll give you props for this one, even if you say you got studio recorded tracks. It's not bad, but you should've spit more to the track, or shortened it up when you was done spittin'. I got respect for hip-hop artists, but you battle me? C'mon fam, let's be real here for a minute. I understand you're tryin' to make your mark on NG, but that ain't the way to go.
I ain't hatin', but you ain't better than me fam. Whatever website you want to freestyle on, go freestyle on it. I ain't got time to sit on a computer battlin', however if you want to go bar for bar spit somethin'. I ain't backin' down from no battle, I'll respond. Let's see where your writtens are at, if you got punchline skills.