Holy shit
If I could make beats I'd take this. Piano and string instruments are my all time favorite to work with on a track, and this sound is no exception. If someone puts a track over the melody, let me know and I'll rip it, because this is raw shit.
Thanks man, I appreciate your Review. specially if you wanna rip over it.. once someone makes a Hip hop beat over it I'll will be happy to let you know.
Yo this is hott
Fuck Lucrazer and Lejin (they may be the same damn people), they wouldn't know what a proper track is supposed to sound like. For crying out loud Lejin used fuckin' Paper Planes to rap over. Anyway, Lucrazer is either Lejin on a fake account, or one of Lejin's dick riders, and I'd guess if not the former then definitely the latter.
The intro was the shit, and when the track dropped it was nothing but sick from start to finish. Big ups, it's something I can't do, I just write and perform lyrics.
Stay up fam,
Nimbus
:) I know
Kind of sad.
I don't normally
Listen to music like this (not sure if it's techno, or what lol) but this is good. I can't really say anything is wrong with it, so big ups on the track.
What's good fam?
Gave a 8. For your age, and especially from the reviews, I'd say this is a good track. Not particularly right for the beat you spit on, but like you said, you had to get it out. I do, however, agree with the last comment below me. Work on wordplay. I don't agree that the words weren't very moving. They had more meaning that people want to think.
Not many people discuss the struggle. I'd say start out working on 16 bar verses, 4 bar (repeat, or 8 straight) choruses. 3 verses to a song. You master that, then work on the wordplay. These lyrics are simple, but they convey a message. I'd say just polish the simplicity out of it, use more similies and medaphores. "Like" and "as if" work very well when describing next to anything.
Oh, and a Thesaurus. Writer's best friend so you don't repeat words in every song.
I liked it, especially the chorus. I wouldn't change that at all fam.
Stay up.
Yeah I've been sort of taking a break from spittin', working on my worldplay and whatnot like I've been told. Thanks for the great review though. Appreciate it when people actually take time to say something relevant. Someday you'll see me at the top of the list here ;) Thanks a lot for puttin' me in your favorites.
Stick to makin' beats.
People can't hardly understand you past your speech impedement (do you know what that means, at least?). Nothing special on the beat either.
You didn't kill me
Why you scared to battle me Lejin? But you steady tellin' people that you have yet to lose a battle. I already called you out, then I called you out in comments and got banned by NG from leaving reviews for a couple of days because you went cryin' to them.
But I guess the truth hurts right? You don't want to get what your boy Linez got, so you scared. At least Linez got balls and gets respect. You just beg for it. This track is garbage fam, so once again I'll call you out to battle. You ain't scared, then prove you have yet to lose.
Thats because your already dead... compliments to linezo LMFAO
fuck a youtube keyboard wangsta poppen that racist shit riding so much dick he got himself a NumbBUTT!
The truth hurts you.... in the ASS ouch!
<<BANG>>KO!
"It took you a week to respond to me"
Great verse (finally). Nah, this will never be over fam. I don't let people speak for me, so pay attention to what I say. Better verse, but don't think I won't mention that while it took a week for me to respond, it took you a week to respond back.
Oh...and I would've posted this review a couple days ago, but Lejin had me banned from posting reviews. So there yah go. 5/5 10/10. We're two of the best on NG so far battlin' and it's gonna get interesting. Oh yeah...and as for those comments below me, your dick ryders. It'll take as long as I want it to take to respond to you.
Yo check this out
First of all my world doesn't revolve around you fam. Second, you'll have your response. Unlike some people, studio time is a precious commodity around here. Anyway, I gave you a 8 for it. It's good, but we'll see when mine is posted how the end result is.
hahahahaha
dont cry nimbut its all good fam cant wait .
Nooooot bad at all
But I already told you what I thought about it.
lol damn what's good man, wow I haven't seen you on in a WHILE. Yeah thanks a lot man, yeah I know. I finally got this thing up here but we have this new song prepared and it should be good, I guess we'll just have to wait and see.
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